How 5 Words Can Instantly Create Curiosity in Your Headlines

I make no secret in my belief that curiosity is the strongest force in direct marketing. Since people have a natural desire to find out more than what they know, tapping into this trait is one way to increase the effectiveness of your marketing materials.

Whether you're writing a sales letter, website content or just an e-mail, your headline (or subject line in the case of an e-mail) is arguably the most important factor in determining your prospects' interest level. After all, as your prospects' interest grows, so does their desire to satisfy curiosity.

Copywriting legend Joe Sugarman is famous for saying, "The sole purpose of the first sentence in an advertisement is to get you to read the second sentence." Of course, your prospect needs a reason to get to the first sentence -- and that's why your headline is so important.

The success of supermarket tabloids relies on curiosity-driven headlines. After all, who wouldn't give at least a glimpse to the following statements?

Woman Delivers Own Baby While Skydiving!

Taco Vendor Turns Tiny Visitors' Abandoned Spacecraft into an ... ALIEN SOMBRERO!

Doctors Successfully Remove Banjo from Alabama Man's Knee!

Obviously, you don't want to make claims that are this outrageous, but that doesn't mean you can't brainstorm some surprising statements to trigger curiosity. Below are five words -- and five time-tested examples -- for helping create curiosity in your next headline.

1. How

I recently read an interview with John Caples, who mentioned using the headline How a Bald Barber Saved My Hair to promote a hair tonic. Although the market was saturated with products when he launched the advertisement, he generated a significant amount of sales. One reason why, he said, was because the word "how" tells prospects a story is involved. A compelling story is one way to keep your prospects reading and, ultimately, buying.

2. These

In the early 1900s, Maxwell Sackheim wrote the famous headline Do You Make These Mistakes in English? to promote an English mail-order course. The advertisement was so successful it ran for 40 years without any changes. Notice how the headline poses a question you can't answer with a simple "yes" or "no." Because of the word "these," you must continue reading to find out the mistakes.

3. Why

Read the headline Why Some People Almost Always Make Money in the Stock Market, and you feel like you're missing out on confidential information successful stock traders already know. What makes this statement credible are the words "some" and "almost." By demonstrating there's still risk and not everyone will make money, the headline portrays less hype and more believability.

4. Which

The headline Which of These $2.50 to $5 Best Sellers Do You Want -- for Only $1 Each? leaves you wondering what books are for sale and why they are priced at only $1. Unfortunately, I couldn't find who wrote this headline, but the pricing leads me to believe the offer is from many years ago. In addition to curiosity, this headline targets your prospects' desire for bargains.

5. What

When the copywriters at Bottom Line/Personal created a headline to help attract magazine subscribers, they used a subject that anyone who travels knows well: airline food. What Never ... Ever to Eat on an Airplane! will keep you curious for a long time -- unless you become a subscriber and find out the answer. Also, with this headline, you feel like you're getting access to rare information as a subscriber, which is perceived as being more valuable.

An additional benefit ...

When you write headlines similar to the samples above, prospects are more likely to view you as someone who provides information that solves their problems. As a result, they'll feel less pressure and your credibility increases -- two factors that go along way in generating more sales.

The Most Powerful Force in Direct Marketing

I recently finished reading Joe Sugarman’s latest book, The Adweek Copywriting Handbook: The Ultimate Guide to Writing Powerful Advertising and Marketing Copy from One of America’s Top Copywriters. The insight he offered into his most successful direct-marketing campaigns was priceless, as were the writing samples that will certainly find a home in my swipe file.

What I found especially fascinating was how the direct-marketing expert described his techniques for selling millions of pairs of BluBlocker sunglasses using what, at the time, was viewed as a risky medium – television.

Sure, with the success of QVC, the Home Shopping Network and countless infomercials, the idea of successfully marketing a product in a 30-minute commercial format doesn’t seem like a big deal these days. But Sugarman took a huge gamble in the 1980s the minute he stepped in front of the camera to demonstrate why viewers needed a new pair of sunglasses.

The technique Sugarman used to tout his product is one that I believe is the most powerful force in direct marketing.

Each infomercial was set up the same way. Sugarman would approach ordinary people off the streets and give them a pair of BluBlockers. Once they tried on the sunglasses, he recorded their reactions. Of course, the feedback presented to viewers was always positive and, more importantly, it caused his prospects to wonder why someone would have such a strong (and often wild) reaction to a pair of sunglasses.

The more interviews Sugarman showed, the more viewers’ curiosity grew. Of course, Sugarman could have easily placed a pair of BluBlockers in front of the camera to reveal what all the excitement was about, but he never did. The only way anyone could ever find out what it was like to wear a pair of BluBlockers was to buy them.

Using curiosity Sugarman sold almost 8 million pairs of BluBlockers during the six years his infomercials ran. This kind of success supports my suggestion that curiosity is the strongest force in direct marketing.

When your prospects are in a store, it’s easy for them to pick up your product, examine it and determine whether or not to make a purchase. However, this decision process is impossible when you’re marketing on the Internet, in a catalog or using a sales letter. But that doesn’t necessarily put you at a disadvantage.

If you use your writing to tease prospects with just enough facts that you leave them guessing, oftentimes they will buy your product simply to satisfy their curiosity.

I recently used this technique while creating a sales page for a new eBook, The Absolute Beginner’s Guide to Mastering Karate: Simple Techniques for Increasing Your Speed & Power in as Little as 30 Days. (Notice how the title even creates curiosity. A prospect’s desired outcome – increased speed and power – is promised in a timeframe that seems almost impossible.)

Below is sample of that sales page.

Here is just a small hint of what you’ll discover in The Absolute Beginner’s Guide to Mastering Karate …

• How to properly use one of the most powerful muscles in your body to increase your kicking force by up to 40%.


• A karate-specific training plan that will get you into peak condition with less effort, less time and maximum results … regardless of your age.


• The natural reaction you must avoid during any altercation. When you respond with this action, you double your reaction rate every time.


• Make this small (and very simple) adjustment in your ready stance and you’ll see huge rewards.


• How to train your body so it instinctively incorporates the 3 keys to an explosive reaction time.

Is your writing revealing too much information about your product? I invite you to try building your prospects’ curiosity the next time you're writing sales-oriented copy. The results just might surprise you.